Thursday, February 27, 2014

I Am What I Am

I just had a book group finish one of my favorite books Because of Winn Dixie.


If you have not read this book, I highly recommend you give it a read.  When the students were done reading, I wanted them to show me their thinking about the book.  This time I had the students write an "I Am Who I Am" poem.  

During my graduate program with the Ohio Writing Project at Miami University I took a class on writing multi-genre papers.  One of the assignments was to write an "I Am Who I Am" poem.  At first I did not think that I would enjoy the assignment.  When I gave the poem a try I wrote the poem in the voice of Ivan from The One and Only Ivan.  I instantly fell in love with the style.  Later for my final project in the class I wrote an "I Am Who I Am" poem in the voice of Piggie from Mo Willems Elephant and Piggie series.


When I have the students write these poems I always give them a copy of my original Ivan "I Am Who I Am" poem.  Here is the copy of the poem that I give to the students:

I am what I am and I am a gorilla     I am what I am The One and Only Ivan     I am patient as stones    nine thousand eight hundred and seventy-six days      in my domain     put on display     only company my Not-Tag, a dog, an elephant, and a little girl     

I am what I am I am an artist    an artist who paints to hide the pain     an artist without an audience      except for a little girl     an artist who can see the beauty surrounded by so much ugliness    

I am what I am I am a prisoner   a prisoner who just realized their prison    a prisoner who committed no crime     a prisoner who forgot the other side

I am what I am I am a friend    I am a friend      I am a friend who made a promise     I am a friend who made a promise he cannot keep     I am a friend who lost his friend

I am what I am I am a rememberer     I remember what they did to my parents    I remember what happened to my sister Tag    I remember the roller coaster and the trip through the drive-thru     I remember the dumpster that they dumped my friend into

I am what I am I am a protector     I am the protector who must not let it happen again    I am protecting her to keep my promise    I am protecting her to protect myself

I am what I am I am a silverback      I am a silverback strong and mighty      I am a silverback who must protect his friends     I am a silverback who paints to gain her freedom    I am a silverback with a message     I am silverback with no words even though they would be easier     I am a silverback      

HOME

I am what I am I am scared     I am scared for it is all new      I am scared I miss my prison     nine thousand eight hundred and seventy-six days     I am scared in this new domain

I am what I am I am free      I am free as a gorilla can be in a zoo     I am free to be with the others     I am free to be an artist     I am MUD

I am what I am I am The One an Only Ivan      

After that I let the students go and write their own poems.  For this project I wanted the students to write their poem in the voice of Opal or Winn Dixie.  Here are some of my favorite bits from the pieces:

I am who I am I am Opal a little girl who is lonely

I am who I am I am a daughter of a preacher and a mom who left me long ago

I am who I am I am lonely I am a girl who needs a little company in my life

I am who I am and I only know
ten things about my mother but the
most important thing is I know that she
loved me very much

I am who I am and I need a little company in my life

I am who I am I am a do I am
a dog named Winn Dixie I am a dog that 
was lonely and lost and beat up

I am who I am I am a special dog
I am a special dog who becomes 
a little girls company and friend

I am what I am I am a girl.
I am a lonely girl.  I have a dog.  I have
a dad that stayed and a mom that 
ran away.

I am what I am a owner of a 
dog    A dog that looks like a piece of wet carpet

MOM

I am what I am a question asker
I ask about my mom    I ask about the hurt

I know I will be happy,
My company a preacher, a girl,
two ladies, a man, and sweetie pie Thomas,
with two bald headed boys.

I am what I am I am a friend     I am a friend
to a helpful little girl     I am a friend
that will follow you from place to place

I cannot tell you how much I love this writing. 

I hope that you are all having a great week. 

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